First Rain

Raindrops . . . Embryos of life flowing from the sky. . . Implanting into Earth’s womb. Earth is ecstatic today . . . Twins bounce, triplets play, quadruplets march in 4/4 time Faster and faster until we cannot count the meter. . . Oh, Heaven and Earth unite today. . . Marry and penetrate…

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Raindrops . . .

Embryos of life flowing from the sky. . .

Implanting into Earth’s womb.

Earth is ecstatic today . . .

Twins bounce, triplets play, quadruplets march in 4/4 time

Faster and faster until we cannot count the meter. . .

Oh, Heaven and Earth unite today. . .

Marry and penetrate your seed deep inside Earth’s womb. She’s been waiting far too long. . .

Desperately yearning for your touch. . .

Please don’t stop, be relentless. . .

Rain on, rain on. . .

For days and nights, and weeks, for many, many moons. . .

Flow deep into the valleys.

And mount the highest peak.

Implant every crevice. . .

Moisture from above glistening over Earth’s brown skin.

Ahhhh the petrichor of rich wet Earth.

Rain. . .Oh rain. . .

Come again, come again, and again, and again, and again.

Genie Nakano, 1993

Photo by Sourav Mishra on Pexels.com

                               

13 responses

  1. Cheryl, Gulf Coast Poet Avatar

    This heartfelt poem is timely, even if written in 1993. I know California has gotten some rain, but more would be welcome! Both the poem and the photo are lovely, Genie. <3 Let it rain, let I rain, let it rain!

  2. Narayan Tushar Kaudinya Avatar

    haaw. That is sad news. I was only learning how to be in 1993.

    It is lovely to know even this little about you. Made me happy. Thanks Genie.

    Narayan x

  3. genienakano Avatar

    Yes, I wrote it in 93 I don’t understand giving back? Now it is worse in LA no rain hardly ever.

  4. Narayan Tushar Kaudinya Avatar

    Great Genie you did, makes me happy. Did you write it in 1993 you mean?

    O yes big time, it’s nature’s way of giving back the good, that humans in power have given.

  5. genienakano Avatar

    I edited my First Rain to use the word Petrichor. Thank you for the new word for a vintage 1993 poem. That was the first drought Los Angeles experienced. Unfortunately it is on going now. The climate has changed.

  6. Narayan Tushar Kaudinya Avatar

    yes. please !

  7. Joy Avatar

    That’s so cool!

  8. genienakano Avatar

    I’m glad you like it. It’s vintage.

  9. genienakano Avatar

    oooohhhh. I like that Petrichor. Maybe in another poem.

  10. genienakano Avatar

    Hi Joy. This is a fun one to read. Read it last night at an open mic.

  11. Hideki Avatar
    Hideki

    Timely!
    Thank you.,.

  12. Joy Avatar

    Beautifully written, Genie! I love the repetition!

  13. Narayan Tushar Kaudinya Avatar

    Petrichor, as they say!

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