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On my hands and kneesI blow a baby spiderout the door. Genie Nakano Feb. 3, 2021

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On my hands and knees
I blow a baby spider
out the door.

Genie Nakano

Feb. 3, 2021





3 responses

  1. genienakano Avatar

    Reblogged this on Genie Nakano and commented:

    a haiku-untitled

  2. genienakano Avatar

    Thank you Raphael. I value your opinions. I will feature this one next week. Haiku never have titles but publishers sometimes require them. For only 3 lines–I don’t think it is necessary but I find myself doing it. Perhaps I could just number the haiku when I post??

  3. rraphael123 Avatar
    rraphael123

    The title, the image, and the poem together are a powerful 1-2 punch to the mind. very powerful. wow.

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