interviewing
myself, I ask
many questions
conversation
above the clouds
nebulous
moonlight
under a sunroof
our first date
Genie Nakano
I am trying something new–senryu. I have experimented with haiku, haibun and renku. Now having fun with senryu.*
*Senryu: a 3-line unrhymed Japanese poem similar to haiku but treating human nature usually in an ironic or satirical vein. Merriam Dictionary
These 3 senryu were published this month in Failed Haiku edited by Michael Rehling online. Here are 3 failed haiku senryu. (what a name?!?)
Sensei says
haiku is always about love
I hate him
last nite
a man in the moon
winked
stiletto heels
high school graduation
self-defence
Genie Jeanne Nakano, 1 .10.21
Genie Nakano 
Reblogged this on Genie Nakano and commented:
Adding more Senryu for Sunday
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To the Mouse:
Yes, Failed Haiku is an online publication. The name is not my favorite. I think Prune Juice is another Senryu line publication. I’m going to look into it today. Lurline Ikeda took the photo of me and I took the picture of the clouds.
Thank you for your comments.
I think you would be good in Senryu.
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Playful senryu. I like this side of you. Great image as well.
Failed Haiku? An online publication?
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