Floating on Air ~~No. 12, 2022 Tanka Response

Genie Nakano & Dean Okamura Kampaithe only Nihongo I knowbrings the clangof glasses filling the spacewhile I am spinning on air Genieshe waits in the darkwhile he rushes throughcrowded alleyspatrons praise the chefthey consume a fiery feast Deanwas it himor the splendor of the nightthat lured meinto his warm embracea night of pas de deuxadrift…

Asian man running through an alley

Written by

Genie Nakano & Dean Okamura

Kampai
the only Nihongo I know
brings the clang
of glasses filling the space
while I am spinning on air Genie

she waits in the dark
while he rushes through
crowded alleys
patrons praise the chef
they consume a fiery feast
Dean

was it him
or the splendor of the night
that lured me
into his warm embrace
a night of pas de deux

adrift in the blues
a roller coaster of smooth deips
synchopated hips
shaking until we come loose
floating through the midnight


music fills the air
wild moths drawn to the flame
out of darkness
into the burning light
we dance into timelessness

Genie Nakano & Dean Okamura
Originally Published in International Tanka
publisher: Aya Yuki
Also published in Better than StarBucks
©2022 Genie Nakano all rights reserved

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