I’m a fish out of water
throw me
back into the sea
I’ll swim backwards
into the time
before I had legs
My Lover Cherita 2
my lover was a drummer
he held my rhythm
in his hands
somewhere
somehow
we lost the melody
Genie Nakano
Genie Nakano
no legs~~ cherita 1
I’m a fish out of water throw meback into the sea I’ll swim backwardsinto the timebefore I had legs My Lover Cherita 2 my lover was a drummer he held my rhythmin his hands somewheresomehowwe lost the melody Genie Nakano Genie Nakano
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4 responses
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That’s very exciting. I love free verse poetry!
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Thank you Bridgette. I’m now going into longer prose. I’ve been tanka a haiku for over 17 years– ready to explore free verse poetry.
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Really vivid writing—so much said in such few words. Well done.
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love both cherita. poignant stories full of realness. thank you.
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