Acting…Reacting~~ a free verse meditation

Acting ~~ Reacting….. forgive me for my actions. A willow of a wisp came out today to play and make up for the way… I’ve been acting … reacting The rain and the breath of a death wants to say… Forgive me for my actions They are ignorant And know not what they do Sparked…

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Acting ~~ Reacting…..
forgive me for my actions.

A willow of a wisp came out today to play
and make up for the way…
I’ve been acting … reacting
The rain and the breath of a death
wants to say…
Forgive me for my actions
They are ignorant
And know not what they do
Sparked by reckless restlessness

Now back to the breath
Release me from my thoughts.

Jeanne Nakano

This is and Oldie written back in 2007. However, it still applies for the present.


2 responses

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    Anonymous

    Thank you for your reply. I appreciate feedback so much. Keep them coming, the good, bad and the ugly. Clint Eastwood.

  2. the mouse Avatar

    It begins with a cheerful bounce and has such a sombre ending.
    Great piece!

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